Request: Line-by-Line Resume Review – Need Help Identifying and Fixing Mistakes

[MaithriChenna]

Hi there!

I'm currently revising my resume and would deeply appreciate a line-by-line review from experienced members here. I feel like something’s off, but I’m not sure exactly what to fix or how to improve the structure, wording, or content.


I’m targeting roles in risk management / data analytics, and I want to make sure my resume is clear, impactful, and aligned with industry expectations.


If you're open to taking a look, attached my CV. Feel free to be brutally honest—I’m here to learn and improve. Every piece of feedback helps.


Thanks in advance for your time and insights!

 

[Andy Nguyen]

Another option is to anonymize your CV and post here. You can also work with some professional career coach who specialized on this line of work.

 

[MaithriChenna]

Thanks @Andy Nguyen, appreciate your insights.

Please see attached anonymized CV

 

[Andy Nguyen]

Students from various MFE programs usually post their resume on LinkedIn. They all follow a standard format that is optimized which you can use as a guideline.
Here is an example.

 

[MaithriChenna]

Thanks Andy!